Descriptive story about a picture.

Write a descriptive story about the picture above.  

Cross out the words in your list as you use them.

After coming back from a superior day  , Tired as an old lady . My feet stumble down as soon as I got through my bedroom door . Ouch , as I cried out loud . It was like I bumped my head on a brick . I got up with an horrendous  headache , crawled up to my bed and with one blink I saw how messy my room was  . I was shocked , but I could barely move my hands to clean this up  so I left it there . Till Later …………...

It was still dark , my eyes opened , I got up and tried to get out of this room without falling or tripping . I escaped  out of there without tripping but I did get cut on the opposite of my left foot . It didn’t look bad but it did sting when I place this sort of spray to help cure accidents . Anyway’s I went into the room with milk in the fridge and poured a cup of milk .

It soothed me and made me feel like going for another sleep . I refused , I wanted to polish up my room with my toys all over the place , my bed not made , but I couldn’t . So I packed only a few stuff’s away so there wouldn’t be that much left .

In the morning when I could hear the birds chirping , I got up ahhhhhhhhh as I put my feet on a curved toy . I went hopping with one foot to the door and I screamed out to my mom if she can tidy up my . But she shouted back at me no. I rolled my eyes with my hand clutched up together.

When it came to the weekends I decided to clean my room and by the time I finished I hands were numb. I had to pick up all the toys, Make my bed , place everything nicely on the draw , I set some of my products nicely on in one corner and I did it again and again and again.

Amazing bird sounds

Kuraia 08/03/2016

Title : Amazing bird sounds

A lyrebird is one of Australia’s unique birds , I am thrilled with all the noises it can create.  Which includes Laser gun , chainsaw , toy gun , construction workers and so on.  One day I went for a stroll in the woods and guess what happen?

I could hear a lyre bird repeating some construction workers across the road , building new houses . It was like some long nails ,scratching against metal . But it was an annoying screech , it was just hideous . So I followed the voice , it got more worser and worser , my eardrum was nearly about to crack . I place my fingers on my ear , and started walking again. The noise stopped for a second , and I saw a  lyrebird up close . As I went up to touch it , It pounced , as if it didn’t like me . I backed off , and it went off . I followed it , until it stopped with another 3 lyre birds in front of it . I was amazed of how many there were . I couldn’t believe my eyes , but then a few seconds later they started mimicking to each other . They didn’t stop mimicking , so I fell into a deep sleep .

As I woke up from my deep sleep , one blink of an eye , they were gone . I jumped up confused , wondering where they went . I saw foot prints , I ran beside it , I ran 21 meters and found them finally  . I stopped , My heart was racing , I slowly breathed in and out. It was getting dark , I strolled out of the woods , and had a good rest at home

My Mother's descriptive writing

Kuraia 03/05/2016

WALT - Write a descriptive story

Success Criteria

• We will use our 5 senses to describe our mum.
• We will use descriptive words like adjectives and adverbs.
• We should choose our Vocabulary carefully.
• We will use Figurative language like similes, Metaphors etc.
• We should organise our ideas using graphic organizers.
• We should re-read our story to make sure it makes sense.

Introduction	1. She is sweet as a lollipop 2. As smart like a computer 3. As buzzy as a bumble bee 4. Her jokes bring a smile to my face.
Sequence of events/Middle Part	1.Screaming to our faces 2.Calm as still trees 3. As fun as a roller coaster. 4 . Thin as a pencil
Conclusion	1.She is one of a kind and hard to find 2.Piece of gold 3. As caring as a nurse.

As I walked into the kitchen, I could smell the succulent piece of gold in the pot. Stomp , stomp as I could hear footsteps following me and it was my mum. Her face was red as she walked through the door,and I had a feeling she was mad. Sweat scrolled down my face as I begin to gain fear. So I slowly walked out the door.

Moments later after dinner we all were watching our favourite show and I could see my mum’s eyes falling into a deep sleep every time she blinks. I took her into bed and she slept all the way through till the morning. When the sunrise I smelt a fantastic bowl of pancake mix being swept into the pan. The answer of 2x2 was how much I would of taken but I saw her eyes staring at me and moved it side to side thinking I had to leave some for my annoying siblings.

Months later mother’s day had appeared. I wondered , what should I have punctual for her hard work she had put in us. I thought and thought and I finally thought that I could write something lovely about her that is meaningly. Dear mum, how could I ever repay you. You bring joy to my face and your jokes are as more funnier than a clown. You are an wonderful and as busy as a bumblebee. Your are as sweet as a lollipop and you are one of a kind and hard to find . Happy mothers day.

My poem was completed , I gave it to my mum and her lips slowly rises as the sun and gave me a big hug with a thankyou face. I was overjoyed to know she appreciated my gift .

Six word sentence

  Kuraia 25/02/2016

Six word sentence

1 . Earth was lucky to have visitors

2 . That’s a funny looking eye patch

3 . Astonished by something new

4 . No that’s definitely not happening

5 . Blue , green what else is there

6 . lightning strikes again what’s happening next

7 . Surfing is me so don’t bother

8 . Bike trouble again gotta walk up

9 . They can’t resist looking at themselves

10 . Men fighting in air is typical

Today in Room 7 we have been writing six word sentences to different pictures given by the teacher,  The one above is one of them . It was hard at the beginning but it got easier and fun to do.   Now I just want to do more.  This could be something you could do with your friends.