Descriptive story about a picture.

Write a descriptive story about the picture above.  

Cross out the words in your list as you use them.

After coming back from a superior day  , Tired as an old lady . My feet stumble down as soon as I got through my bedroom door . Ouch , as I cried out loud . It was like I bumped my head on a brick . I got up with an horrendous  headache , crawled up to my bed and with one blink I saw how messy my room was  . I was shocked , but I could barely move my hands to clean this up  so I left it there . Till Later …………...

It was still dark , my eyes opened , I got up and tried to get out of this room without falling or tripping . I escaped  out of there without tripping but I did get cut on the opposite of my left foot . It didn’t look bad but it did sting when I place this sort of spray to help cure accidents . Anyway’s I went into the room with milk in the fridge and poured a cup of milk .

It soothed me and made me feel like going for another sleep . I refused , I wanted to polish up my room with my toys all over the place , my bed not made , but I couldn’t . So I packed only a few stuff’s away so there wouldn’t be that much left .

In the morning when I could hear the birds chirping , I got up ahhhhhhhhh as I put my feet on a curved toy . I went hopping with one foot to the door and I screamed out to my mom if she can tidy up my . But she shouted back at me no. I rolled my eyes with my hand clutched up together.

When it came to the weekends I decided to clean my room and by the time I finished I hands were numb. I had to pick up all the toys, Make my bed , place everything nicely on the draw , I set some of my products nicely on in one corner and I did it again and again and again.

My Mother's descriptive writing

Kuraia 03/05/2016

WALT - Write a descriptive story

Success Criteria

• We will use our 5 senses to describe our mum.
• We will use descriptive words like adjectives and adverbs.
• We should choose our Vocabulary carefully.
• We will use Figurative language like similes, Metaphors etc.
• We should organise our ideas using graphic organizers.
• We should re-read our story to make sure it makes sense.

Introduction	1. She is sweet as a lollipop 2. As smart like a computer 3. As buzzy as a bumble bee 4. Her jokes bring a smile to my face.
Sequence of events/Middle Part	1.Screaming to our faces 2.Calm as still trees 3. As fun as a roller coaster. 4 . Thin as a pencil
Conclusion	1.She is one of a kind and hard to find 2.Piece of gold 3. As caring as a nurse.

As I walked into the kitchen, I could smell the succulent piece of gold in the pot. Stomp , stomp as I could hear footsteps following me and it was my mum. Her face was red as she walked through the door,and I had a feeling she was mad. Sweat scrolled down my face as I begin to gain fear. So I slowly walked out the door.

Moments later after dinner we all were watching our favourite show and I could see my mum’s eyes falling into a deep sleep every time she blinks. I took her into bed and she slept all the way through till the morning. When the sunrise I smelt a fantastic bowl of pancake mix being swept into the pan. The answer of 2x2 was how much I would of taken but I saw her eyes staring at me and moved it side to side thinking I had to leave some for my annoying siblings.

Months later mother’s day had appeared. I wondered , what should I have punctual for her hard work she had put in us. I thought and thought and I finally thought that I could write something lovely about her that is meaningly. Dear mum, how could I ever repay you. You bring joy to my face and your jokes are as more funnier than a clown. You are an wonderful and as busy as a bumblebee. Your are as sweet as a lollipop and you are one of a kind and hard to find . Happy mothers day.

My poem was completed , I gave it to my mum and her lips slowly rises as the sun and gave me a big hug with a thankyou face. I was overjoyed to know she appreciated my gift .