Descriptive Paragraph - Fireworks

Sight	Hear	Smell	Feel	Taste
Glowing sparkles Colorful Meteorites Images	Boom Fire Clash	Smoke Gunpowder	Anxious Excited	Smoke Washing powder

WALT - Write a descriptive paragraph

Success Criteria

• I must use my 5 senses
• I must use adjectives
• I muse use precise verbs
• I must use figurative language

Descriptive paragraph - Fireworks Display

Staring in the night sky  BOOM! , a burst of color lit my eyes . A glamorous piece of art had left little droplets of golden meteorites falling to their doom . The aroma had instantly filled up my backyard with a gust of smoke waving past my nose . I started to find a no smoke area but the fog around me just blocked my way, although I could still feel the rough edges of my house and the crackling ground near the deck . BOOM! , with the thrill of another one , I rapidly stumbled up the stairs and noticed so many comets in the sky . It was like a gigantic waterfall in the air , but the taste of the fireworks wasn’t as good as my lavender t-shirt covered against my nose .

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Angel - I was really impressed on how you described your senses, but your writing was extremely inspiring and interesting to read.