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Wednesday, 8 November 2017

Descriptive Paragraph - Fireworks


Sight
Hear
Smell
Feel
Taste
Glowing sparkles
Colorful
Meteorites
Images
Boom
Fire

Clash
Smoke
Gunpowder
Anxious
Excited
Smoke
Washing powder


WALT - Write a descriptive paragraph

Success Criteria
  • I must use my 5 senses
  • I must use adjectives
  • I muse use precise verbs
  • I must use figurative language

Descriptive paragraph - Fireworks Display

Staring in the night sky  BOOM! , a burst of color lit my eyes . A glamorous piece of art had left little droplets of golden meteorites falling to their doom . The aroma had instantly filled up my backyard with a gust of smoke waving past my nose . I started to find a no smoke area but the fog around me just blocked my way, although I could still feel the rough edges of my house and the crackling ground near the deck . BOOM! , with the thrill of another one , I rapidly stumbled up the stairs and noticed so many comets in the sky . It was like a gigantic waterfall in the air , but the taste of the fireworks wasn’t as good as my lavender t-shirt covered against my nose .

Jenascia - I liked how you described the scene with .

Angel - I was really impressed on how you described your senses, but your writing was extremely inspiring and interesting to read.  

Friday, 27 October 2017

Easttle Maths result

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Today I have done a easttle test for maths and I am very, very happy with my score. I have finally reached my goal in getting a 5 in my test . So for my next goal I want to get at least  1 or 2 levels higher than my practice score.